Luggage Label · round 9 · the ticket on the water

A · Beforefields beside the title

The previous version, kept for comparison: the stacked title ranged left with the four fields as a block beside it, and three of the facts repeated on the stub.

The Danube winding through Budapest, seen from above

Passenger ticket

Edition No. 01

KnittingTheDanube

8 days. An entire river cruise ship. 150 knitters.

From
Budapest
To
Passau
Sailing
6 Nov 2027
Room
No. 312

Not transferable · good for one passage · wool carried free

No. 001 of 150

Budapest Passau

Sailing 6 November 2027

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B · Afterthe panel is the poster, the stub is the particulars

Main panel centred like the posters: crest, Passenger ticket, Edition, the stacked title with its small THE, and the facts as one spaced-caps line. Every particular moved to the stub, nothing printed twice. The button toned to the paper.

The Danube winding through Budapest, seen from above

Passenger ticket

Edition No. 01

KnittingTheDanube

8 days · An entire river cruise ship · 150 knitters

No. 001 of 150

From
Budapest
To
Passau
Sailing
6 Nov 2027
Room
No. 312
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C · After, proportionednarrower ticket, bigger lockup, facts at the title's measure

The same ticket as B with four numbers changed: the ticket narrower, the title a step up, the crest a third bigger, and the facts line set in italic at the title's width between end-capped rules, the way the posters set their route line. Same whitespace, now margin.

The Danube winding through Budapest, seen from above

Passenger ticket

Edition No. 01

KnittingTheDanube

8 days · an entire river cruise ship · 150 knitters

No. 001 of 150

From
Budapest
To
Passau
Sailing
6 Nov 2027
Room
No. 312
Book NowEnquire first