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Knitting the Danube, auditedversion 2 with the contradictions fixed and the repeats cut
Route reaches day eight, boarding at two, one set of deck names, two co-founders, guest relations, captions that match their pictures, no November sun deck. The Idea card is the argument alone; the Ship section describes the ship instead of re-arguing the charter; the single-cabin terms live on the cabin card only.
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Knitting the Danube, with the programmeversion 1 with round 11’s option 1 as A Day Aboard
The same page as version 1, with the Day Aboard section replaced by the ship’s daily programme card for Vienna beside three rows that state the rhythm: mornings ashore, afternoons with the needles, evenings that run long.
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Knitting the Danube, assembledthe round 10 ticket hero on the Luggage Label page
The 7e ticket on the river photograph as the hero, then every section of The Luggage Label beneath it: the idea, a day aboard, the route, the ship, host, team, founders’ letter, community, inclusions, getting there, FAQ, enquiry and footer.
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Round 13 · two options · newest
The Route, with photographssix views in the labels, or one valley across the section
The section only. A: each port label carries a view of its town, one shape each, in the label’s ink. B: a single wide photograph of the Wachau, the labels staying paper.
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Round 12 · five options
The Ship, in photographsthe MS Oscar Wilde’s restaurant, cabins, lounge and sun deck, tagged
The section only. An album page with photo corners, a deck plan with numbered prints, postcards, photographs with luggage tags, and a brochure spread with the ship’s particulars.
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Round 11 · eight options
A Day Aboard, as the ship’s programmeround 7’s O card, eight ways of also showing the daily rhythm
The section only. The rhythm told in copy, a pile of eight cards, two days side by side, a flickable day strip, the week printed on the reverse, a noticeboard, the printer’s master with the day filled in by hand, and the master on the pile.
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Round 10 · eight options
Where the Facts Gothe round 9 ticket, the three facts placed eight ways
On the ticket or off it: as the lockup’s last line, on the water, as stamps, on a baggage tag, as a band at the foot, on the stub, down the perforation, or as a printer’s imprint.
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Round 9 · the ticket, refined
The Ticket on Colourround 8 H, to Almog’s brief
No chart, no text on the water. The ticket cut down to the trip with a room number, and the water in colour under a sand paper wash.
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Round 8 · ten heroes
Chart, Water, Ticketmixes of the round 7 picks K, E and C
The river chart, the full-bleed water and the passenger ticket without its price, combined ten ways: on the water, inside the ticket, split, stacked, as two objects, as a window, pinned with views.
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Round 6 · ten heroes
Luggage Label Heroespicks: C, J, E, G, F
The Trunk, the Baggage Tag, the View, the Porthole, the Belt, the Passport, the Ticket, the Blush Edition, the Shipping Line, the Postcard. Duotone placeholder photographs in the two inks.
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Round 7 · fifteen heroes
Luggage Label Heroes, round 7built from the round 6 picks
The Album, the Postcard Rack, the Passenger Ticket, the Holder’s Page, the Panorama, the Filmstrip, the Other Side, the Ticket Book, the Timetable, the Diptych, the Chart, the Ball Band, the Door Hanger, the Slides, the Programme.
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